12.21写作解析——人们在家时间越来越少的原因,真是简单到分分钟say goodby —— Simon 1月写作班上车报名
Task one:table
Task two: people spend less and less time in homes. Reasons and effects on society
Reasons: 很多城市居民更多时间都是在外面(city dwellers spend most of their time outside) 其中一个很主要的原因(one of the justifications)是过多的工作量(excessive workload/extra workhours)例如,一个普通员工每天至少需要工作8个小时(an average worker has to spend eight hours at their workplace),并且在当今社会中,通常还伴随着额外加班的时间(along with extra work time to complete tasks)繁忙的生活,以及每日面对的压力,让我们和家人团聚的时间缩短(our busy modern day lifestyles, and the stresses of the daily grind, are keeping us from spending time with our families. )同样需要提到的一点事(equally important),随着社会的发展(with the advancement of society)人们在工作之余有很多的娱乐选择(have massive chocies on leisure activities)比如,游乐园(theme park)酒吧等,所以人们的生活方式越来越多元化(being more diverse)而不是只能选择呆在家里(staying at home)
effects:这种现象还是会带来一些影响(this phenomenon can lead to several netative effects) 因为人们需要情感支持来平复负面情绪(people need emotional support from family to neutralize their negative emotion)并且脱离负面的工作环境(seperate them from stressful working environment)如果长时间脱离家庭(be isolated from family), 人们的情感会变得孤立(be secluded)并且削弱家庭关系(weaken the family bond)人和人之间的关系会逐渐冷漠(be grdually indifferent),最终社会的凝聚力也会随之下降(which in turn the social cohesion will reduce accordingly)
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