如何写好代码系列
收到很多人的邮件、信息,问我如何才能写好代码。
就我的见闻来看,甚至有很多多年经验的资深程序员写的代码也问题频发,缺乏基本的素质。因此打算 review 一些代码并改写,解释一些原则和方法。
文中很多东西书上也会写,希望我这个系列能作为一个有益的补充。
本文以一个投稿的简短程序为例,逐步改写并附上解释。
# users.json
"""
[
{
"type": "message",
"user": "UAOI192",
"text": "你好",
"ts": "1444916384.000042"
},
{
"type": "message",
"user": "UAOI102",
"text": "世界",
"ts": "1444916420.000044"
}
]
"""
# messages.json
"""
[
{
"id": "UAOI102",
"name": "bot1",
"profile": {
"title": "shui",
"first_name": "",
"last_name": "ju",
"real_name": "ju",
"email": "abc@qq.com"
},
},
{
"id": "UAOI192",
"name": "bot2",
"profile": {
"title": "",
"first_name": "",
"last_name": "机",
"real_name": "机",
"email": "def@gmail.com",
},
}
]
"""
# ————————————
# 原始版本
# ————————————
import json
import time
with open('/Users/hehehe/PycharmProjects/chat/users.json', 'r') as f:
data = json.load(f)
ddic=dict()
for i in range(28):
ddic[data[i]['id']]= data[i]['name']
for key in ddic.keys():
print (key,ddic[key])
with open('/Users/hehehe/PycharmProjects/chat/2015-10-15.json', 'r') as f1:
d2 = json.load(f1)
for i in range(len(d2)):
d2[i]['user']=ddic[d2[i]['user']]
print (time.ctime(float(d2[i]['ts'])),':')
print (d2[i]['user'],':',d2[i]['text'])
# ————————————
# 格式化后的版本
# 请参考 PEP8 编码规范
# ————————————
import json
import time
with open('/Users/hehehe/PycharmProjects/chat/users.json', 'r') as f:
data = json.load(f)
ddic = dict()
for i in range(28):
ddic[data[i]['id']] = data[i]['name']
for key in ddic.keys():
print(key, ddic[key])
with open('/Users/hehehe/PycharmProjects/chat/2015-10-15.json', 'r') as f1:
d2 = json.load(f1)
for i in range(len(d2)):
d2[i]['user'] = ddic[d2[i]['user']]
print(time.ctime(float(d2[i]['ts'])), ':')
print(d2[i]['user'], ':', d2[i]['text'])
# ————————————
# 取更合适的变量名
# 使用变量简化语句和逻辑,消除重复
# ————————————
import json
import time
user_file = '/Users/hehehe/PycharmProjects/chat/users.json'
with open(user_file, 'r') as f:
user_dict_list = json.load(f)
username_dict = {}
for i in range(28):
user = user_dict_list[i]
user_id = user['id']
username = user['name']
username_dict[user_id] = username
for key in username_dict.keys():
print(key, username_dict[key])
message_file = '/Users/hehehe/PycharmProjects/chat/2015-10-15.json'
with open(message_file, 'r') as f1:
message_dict_list = json.load(f1)
for i in range(len(message_dict_list)):
message = message_dict_list[i]
message['user'] = username_dict[message['user']]
timestamp = float(message['ts'])
formatted_time = time.ctime(timestamp)
print(formatted_time, ':')
print(message['user'], ':', message['text'])
# ————————————
# 用更合适的库函数和语句
# ————————————
import json
import time
user_file = '/Users/hehehe/PycharmProjects/chat/users.json'
with open(user_file, 'r') as f:
user_dict_list = json.load(f)
username_dict = {}
# for i in range(28):
# user = user_dict_list[i]
# 经过上一步的变量提取,这里的改写只需要做一点微小的改动而不影响后续代码
for user in user_dict_list:
user_id = user['id']
username = user['name']
username_dict[user_id] = username
for key, value in username_dict.items():
print(key, value)
message_file = '/Users/hehehe/PycharmProjects/chat/2015-10-15.json'
with open(message_file, 'r') as f1:
message_dict_list = json.load(f1)
# for i in range(len(message_dict_list)):
# message = message_dict_list[i]
# 经过上一步的变量提取,这里的改写只需要做一点微小的改动而不影响后续代码
for message in message_dict_list:
message['user'] = username_dict[message['user']]
timestamp = float(message['ts'])
formatted_time = time.ctime(timestamp)
print(formatted_time, ':')
print(message['user'], ':', message['text'])
# ————————————
# 使用函数划分逻辑和代码
# ————————————
import json
import time
# 下面这四个注释看上去很奇怪是因为我是先注释了原来的代码功能块再提取为函数的
# load users
def users_dict_from_file(user_file):
with open(user_file, 'r') as f:
user_dict_list = json.load(f)
username_dict = {}
for user in user_dict_list:
user_id = user['id']
username = user['name']
username_dict[user_id] = username
return username_dict
# print users
def print_users(users_dict):
for key, value in users_dict.items():
print(key, value)
# load messages
def messages_from_file(message_file):
with open(message_file, 'r') as f:
message_dict_list = json.load(f)
return message_dict_list
# print messages
def print_messages(message_dict_list, username_dict):
for message in message_dict_list:
username = username_dict[message['user']]
timestamp = float(message['ts'])
formatted_time = time.ctime(timestamp)
print(formatted_time, ':')
print(username, ':', message['text'])
# run code
user_file = '/Users/hehehe/PycharmProjects/chat/users.json'
message_file = '/Users/hehehe/PycharmProjects/chat/2015-10-15.json'
username_dict = users_dict_from_file(user_file)
print_users(username_dict)
messages = messages_from_file(message_file)
print_messages(messages, username_dict)
# ————————————
# 我写程序的思路
# ————————————
# model classes
class GuaModel(object):
def __init__(self, json_dict):
super(Model, self).__init__()
self._obj_from_json(json_dict)
def __repr__(self):
# properties = json.dumps(self.__dict__, sort_keys=True, indent=2)
# return "<{0}: {1}>".format(self.__class__.__name__, properties)
class_name = self.__class__.__name__
properties = ('{0} = {1}'.format(k, v) for k, v in self.__dict__.items())
return '<{0}: \n {1}\n>'.format(class_name, '\n '.join(properties))
def key_mapper(self):
"""Force subclasses to implement this method"""
raise NotImplementedError
def _obj_from_json(self, json_obj):
"""Private method"""
mapper = self.key_mapper()
print('mapper', mapper)
for k, v in mapper.items():
try:
paths = v.split('.')
v = json_obj
for p in paths:
v = v[p]
except Exception as e:
v = None
setattr(self, k, v)
# define models
class User(GuaModel):
def key_mapper(self):
mapper = {
'id': 'id',
'name': 'name',
'real_name': 'profile.real_name',
}
return mapper
class Message(GuaModel):
def key_mapper(self):
mapper = {
'user_id': 'user',
'text': 'text',
'timestamp': 'ts',
}
return mapper
def formatted_time(self):
timestamp = float(self.timestamp)
ft = time.ctime(timestamp)
return ft
def users_dict_from_file(user_file):
with open(user_file, 'r') as f:
users = [User(u) for u in json.load(f)]
username_dict = {}
for u in users:
username_dict[u.id] = u.name
return username_dict
# print users
def print_users(users):
for u in users
print(u)
# load messages
def messages_from_file(message_file):
with open(message_file, 'r') as f:
messages = [Message(m) for m in json.load(f)]
return messages
# print messages
def print_messages(messages, username_dict):
for m in messages:
user = username_dict[m.id]
content = '{} :\n{} : {}'.format(m.formatted_time(), user.name, m.text)
print(content)
写得比较匆忙,如有问题、疑问请留言,我会在周末抽空回复并更新文章。
也欢迎大家投稿自己的代码来参与 review。
「review 是提高能力的外挂。」—— 萧井陌